Sunday, December 8, 2013

A Castle In The Heart.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The castle is built, slowly with the moments,
The foundation is deep, erected in the heart,
Year after year a floor, rising up to the air,
Rooms are a lot, furnished with souvenirs,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Natarajan Ramaseshan 09 December 2013

Packed with emotions.Very nice

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Babatunde Aremu 09 December 2013

Nicely written. I wish to suggest you write a novel out of this. Thanks for sharing

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 December 2013

this is such a lovely poem!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 December 2013

Castles in the air are now turned into castles in the thoughts. Rebuilding may be easier than picking all the pieces. One more and you reach 1000. It is real.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 08 December 2013

Thomas A Robinson says, Only shows how fragile a person can be and how callous the world is. The last line is the most beautiful.

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