Sunday, September 3, 2006

A Case Of Domestic Violence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her beauty was beyond compare but her heart was full of despair,
she loved her husband and there was no other, but she never knew
he had a secret lover.To her he was the perfect man a father,
a friend and a village fan.They loved him because
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Ernestine Northover 12 September 2006

This sounds like an epic novel Sylvia, what a write. You put everything into your poems, the imagery is great. Love Ernestine XXX

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Sandra Fowler 06 September 2006

What an exceptional write, Sylvia! This one came straight from the soul with no hesitation. It is haunting, powerful and beautifully written. Encore! Love from your friend and sister, Sandra

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Geoff Warden 05 September 2006

A very powerful subject......well constructed Sylvia......

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Scarlett Treat 03 September 2006

What a sad, touching story, one which you know so well! I am thankful daily that you escaped the hurt, even at a 'Snail's' pace. Scarlett

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Duncan Wyllie 03 September 2006

This is a very powerful subject and you have displayed it so well, I espeicially enjoyed the last lines, well done Sis Love duncan X

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