A Cascading Journey Comments
My thoughts are falling
on my stone heart, leaving a deep cavity
on my heart, like the waterfall
falling from high mountain
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Great imagery and thoughtful quenching of creative knowledge in this poem. Really enjoyed it's rhythm and flow like the cascading waterfall of your mind. Thank you, RoseAnn
thoughts will evaporate and reach the sky They become source of creation. Beautiful.
A thoughtful write. Beautiful lines.... my thoughts will evaporate and reach the sky, and to drizzle with mild water, to irrigate creation to quench thirst of creature. Beautiful cascading journey one followed by another to serve the purpose of journey. Loved reading this wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing with us.
Bursting with a beauty that is refreshing.
Lovely! Beautiful! Whilst reading it, I could smell an energetic cascade, all set for the journey toward a higher beginning to the next stop. Learning and improving :)
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7/19/2025 11:31:12 AM # 1.0.0
Nice thought, nice imagery, nice poem.