Wednesday, June 4, 2008

A Cascade Of You Comments

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Thunder quakes outside my door
I open it, it starts to pour
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Sheets of water cascading down
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Rachel The Hair Guru
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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

Sheets of water cascading down I feel your presence all around. Rachel Ann Butler

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Cory Jensen 12 January 2009

I agree with Chris.....you are amazing at what you do! ! ! ♥ ♥ ♥

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Chris Harris 23 November 2008

Beautiful Rachel, made me shudder, you are the queen of short and sweet! x

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Al Ramos 03 August 2008

They say love is all around us and your poem shows it. Great job.

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Subbaraman N V 08 June 2008

Greatly emotional! A nice write. Thanks for sharing!

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Catherine Rica Cosico 04 June 2008

Affection is in the air Sheets of water pouring in thy heart full of passion full of love entering the soul entwined

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