The words did shatter,
Tears spurted out.
Heart did wring,
Legs did quiver,
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A brave style of poetic expression about Parting with someone is so beautifully Expressed.. for every stanza sounds so honest and gives high Philosophical whiffs!
A poignant piece of poetry! Pulsating expression loaded with deep emotion for losing something valuable still believing for a spiritual union! Fantastic.....Though a thousand miles away/Your breaths can be felt, near The Chambers of my heart.......Full marks for the piece of work with effervescent tone! .....10
A wonderful poem dear Gopika. Brilliantly penned