Friday, February 23, 2018

A Carry Bag Of Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

The words did shatter,
Tears spurted out.
Heart did wring,
Legs did quiver,
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GOPIKA RADEESH
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 December 2022

A wonderful poem dear Gopika. Brilliantly penned

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Naila Rais 09 April 2018

So sad.... May her soul rest in peace... A deep write...10 Naila

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Siddartha Montik 28 February 2018

A brave style of poetic expression about Parting with someone is so beautifully Expressed.. for every stanza sounds so honest and gives high Philosophical whiffs!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 February 2018

A poignant piece of poetry! Pulsating expression loaded with deep emotion for losing something valuable still believing for a spiritual union! Fantastic.....Though a thousand miles away/Your breaths can be felt, near The Chambers of my heart.......Full marks for the piece of work with effervescent tone! .....10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 February 2018

Gopika, such a well expressed poem👍👍👍

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