A Carpet Tale Comments

i loved readin ur poem...it's greit plz red my poem INTROSPECTION on page 2 thanks dear

What a great few lines, comparing the carpet to personal feelings, very clever My favourite lines 'Then what makes it worse I get scrubbed with a spray, but trufully that's just rubbing it in, not taking it away. Well done again Sis! take care Love duncan X

You have a wonderful way of bringing ordinary, everyday things to life, Sylvie. Thoroughly enjoyed this lively read, laughed a lot as well, and now I am going to be careful with the Shake'n'Vac because I don't want my carpets to end up getting the flu! Love, Fran xxxx

What a vivid tale this old carpet has to tell. Cheers for your wonderful imagination. I love it, Sylvia. Always your sister and friend, Sandra