Monday, February 11, 2008

A Cargo Of Sins Comments

Rating: 5.0

A sojourn in the sleep,
Led me to the valley deep,
I passed through forest thick,
And high hills and crests,
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Muhammad Shanazar
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C. P. Sharma 04 January 2009

A superb tale of sinners in Chaucerian style but in modern English. You have the genius of a poet. CP

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Iram Jamil 20 November 2008

Remarkable words... your write is superb, marvellous job. Thank you.

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Seema Chowdhury 16 February 2008

This is such a true poem. we are all voyagers who are walking with the load of our sins and good deeds. i also wrote a poem long ago on the same theme. i hope we can mend ourselves and our deeds before its too late to do anything.thanks for sharing your good thoughts with everyone. take care Seema

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