# A Caress Comments

its splendid! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Sam my friend, your words echo what many crave...expressed in the only way a natural poet such as yourself could say......with flare.....very well penned

A sweet caress sure to chase the darkness away. Why to shy way? Why to Deny? Just yearn for it.. Thats all i can say.

yes, it is! ! 10..

its a fact, precisely written

That is the nature of this world!

brief and meaningful.........

nice one, like a senryu

nice and meaningful....

beautiful as it is written..grace

it is ok, you should not have forced the rhyme. the first line, it replaced would definitely make the good poem, better...

Well, this is clearly a senryu poem, samanyan, and it does meet the 5-7-5 syllable count required for this form of poetry. I don't think the poem itself is as expressive as it could be, but it does manage to get it's point across. Carl.

The warmth of a gentle touch cannot be overestimated. My beautiful pup, Treasure insists that I give you a ten for this. Always your friend, Sandra

I have a tail wagging at me now.

gud 1..its the fact... i was supposed to write 'a real torture' in my last senryu (marriage) .. but later thought of changing it.. coz there r some who mite not take it as a real torture :)

just pride to read.........

I like the last line

Who doesn't love to be caressed?

you have expressed it right, but a caress is a beautiful thing when both yearn for it togrther.

Nice micro poem to read!