Saturday, January 11, 2014

A Carefree Life Comments

Rating: 3.5

A carefree life
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Between the cradle;
And the grave
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Geetha Jayakumar 27 June 2014

Beautiful poem filled with positivity...Loved lines... Between the cradle; And the grave For the meanings of life And for little space He struggles and craves....Loved reading each lines. Beautifully you have presented it.

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Full of feelings and pregnant with a passion that teaches how to live life with out fear. Well done my friend!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 January 2014

Very touching.........excellent one and nicely composed! ......10 Tanmay kumar sankhua

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 11 January 2014

Many many thanks, my dear poet Mohammad Akmal Nazir........please read my other poems at your leisure time

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 January 2014

Very poignant write indeed! A sure...........10.

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