Sunday, November 8, 2020

A Care That The World Needs Comments

Rating: 5.0

I take my heart out among the orphans,
to play and sing a lullaby.

I spread my helping hand to shower the care.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Mahtab Bangalee 12 November 2020

This life's joy is not in our success alone. But, taking others along with to the mount of happiness. /// yeah right you are

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 November 2020

A well composed poem. Truly magnificent.....5 stars *****

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Poetic Sky 10 November 2020

Yes taking along is an act of greatness.5**

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2020

I shall travel the path not taken by many, to reach where life is beyond hatred and double standards....so impressive with lofty theme. A beautiful poem on love and life is amazingly shared. Thank you Asim ji, five stars.

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Rajnish Manga 10 November 2020

Marvelous poem with a sublime message. Most of us have no concern for the less fortunate especially for the children languishing in orphanages and their hardships. It is the resolve of the poet to change this situation that appeals the reader most. Thanks, Asim ji.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 November 2020

This life's joy is not in our success alone. But, taking others along with to the mount of happiness. So wonderful, so noble, so benevolent! Wish everybody thought like this. Thank you dear Poet Asim ji for this lovely poem......5 Stars

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Kostas Lagos 08 November 2020

Beautiful poem. It is a shame to consider people as " untouchable"

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Deluke Muwanigwa 08 November 2020

Great poem. Thats what God wants us to do. To look after his forsaken children. To sow and show love. We can pray build super churches and know every verse but if we dont love someone we are wasting time. I wish you best of luck in your philanthropy my brother

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 November 2020

A magnificent piece of poetry! I greatly appreciate and admire the poet's expression embodied in the penultimate stanza! 5 stars

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M Asim Nehal 08 November 2020

This life's joy is not in our success alone. But, taking others along with to the mount of happiness.

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