A Caravan Of Thoughts (Part 2) Comments

(cont.) ...i don't follow things so well, [but well enough] due in part to lack of knowledge of your religion/customs/names, & I DON'T went to spend too much time here; supper soon! to MyPoemList. thanks for sharing. i read part 1 also, of course. bri :) . thanks for Poet's Notes.

(cont.) ..But, Hira, there are quite a few lovely poetic descriptions which i enjoyed: 1- curiosity birds 2 - wore a black veil 3- swinging on the swing of my own doubts 4- infinity of Your love 5- my heart's shelf & i like goosebumps; i haven't heard that word in a long time! (cont.) ..

(cont.) .. reminds me you, O Allah! ....i'd put of in front of you. :) & when heard him pray....i'd put I in front of heard. last stanza: i'd use reveal to you and i'd use on my heart's shelf. (cont.) ..

HAIL...i guess you mean (verb) salute, greet, but there are other definitions, including a noun meaning: pellets of frozen rain that fall in showers from cumulonimbus clouds. OR a large number of objects hurled forcefully through the air, .and hale sounds the same, but is entirely different. do you get frozen rain where 'you were traveling' in the poem? (cont.) ..

When we allow our soul and heart and mind to talk and listen to our Creator, religion takes on a wonderful dimension. Even though the needs of our soul and the desire of our bodies tend to pull often in different directions, with lots of sincerity and a tough conscience, the two can often coexist in harmony. Listen to your heart, was the advice of grandmother Willow to Pocahontas. Very interesting, well written poem