Friday, February 13, 2009

A Caravan Across The Desert Comments

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There goes a caravan across the desert,
A gang of kids, lads, women and men.
On the way they discover
New mysterious lands to fill.
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J T Jayasingh
kids howl Ghosts Traditions
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Indira Renganathan 17 February 2009

Gives a feeling of watching a movie....'They invent plastic machines To alter the universal codes'-only this...how do you relate this to the mainstream of the poem...sorry I'm unable to get to it...otherwise good writing...good subject

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