A Captive Wing Comments

Perceptions and distress treatments All at a naked eye and life. A thoughtful poem.

Every single line is written wonderfully, but each line feels un-connected to the next line and there is no unity in the poem. I will read another poem by you and comment. I hope to see a more togethor poem.

Wow Impressive, I love the rythm. Amazing talent you have, what a gift. Go on! Keep going & don't stop, reach for the stars! :)

Never before I imagined Pushed down and removed Suddenly it raised in my actions the people in our life makes us put our best foot forward...as a poet you do just that...the mind is a wonder of wonders as is your writing...GREAT!

Nice flow... vivid words... strong talent here

Here the feelings are not revealed, yet the desire is overpassing all the being of the lover. Until the emotions are expressed aloud, this love remains unreachable/forbidden/infantuated/mute. The lover is like a peeping tom without malice. I like this poem a lot! Keep-on aspiring and sharing your compo.

well in captivating her as well as the readers.10

This is really good! I love these poems too, I love your writing style.

this poem is superb and you have good way of putting up your feelings.10

a well constructed sonnet on love. brilliant