A Capacity For Limitless Serenity Comments

Your skill for imagery is wonderful! Thank you.

a strong, character-driven poem, and touching at that. that you're able to glean so much from wonton soup shows your skill at focusing on particular things. i'd like to read more of Matilda.

Charles, I believe you've mentioned Mengs before........I always get the image of the diner on Seinfeld (I don't know why) in your poems. I love it. This woman seems to know what's important..........great poem. Sincerely, Mary

Charlie, Matilda Herbert now stands to me as an example in being happy within oneself, whatever your lot. People-knowing writing from you as usual, Charlie. Warm regards, Gina.

Wonderful story, great imagery and a well evoked character. All in all, pretty damned good! Hugs Anna xxx

Excellent story Charles, Like a pixel of your everyday life, Charlie.

Another lovely story from you pen Charles. Your characters are so alive, and colourful. Loved it. love Ernestine XXX

As ever, you bring everyday life into glorious existence for your humble readership! :) - thank you.

Your poems are one of the small things in my life that make me smile Charles. Limitless serenity comes is small packages, and they just keep coming. 10 from Tai