Sunday, March 22, 2009

A Canopy Of Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wings of night
few silently under a silver moon,
lovers gazed into each other’s eyes
as they walked together
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David Harris
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Alison Cassidy 05 April 2009

Such a beautiful metaphor 'canopy of silence' to round off each stanza of this lyrical poem about night and love and the music of the stars. This is certainly one of your best. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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David, Are you sure Bonnie Collins hasn't written this? So beautiful and moving. This sinks deeply into my Pisces moon. Can't wait for tonight to see the moon!

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Stephen Stirk 22 March 2009

I loved the imagery again Steve

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