Monday, June 27, 2016

A Candlelight At Midnight Comments

Rating: 4.4

Whenever I gaze at the candlelight
in a silent room at midnight,
with its flickering flame float
my thoughts that freely over rupture gloat.
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Istabraq Al Ahmadi
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Roseann Shawiak 22 July 2016

Often I will sit outside by candlelight writing poetry, glancing at it's flame bowing and flickering before me, your poem brought this to mind in a memory, as it brought back old happy days written in your poem. Candlelight seems to be so delicate in thought, drawing wonder from one's mind to write about. Delightful and enchanting poem which I thoroughly enjoyed! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 02 July 2016

A very well written piece, Istabraq. You have a talent

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Thanks a lot Mr. Kelly for supportive and kind comment

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Bursting with a beauty that is both creative and compelling,

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My poem is bursting with beauty the same as your heart is bursting with kindness! Thanks a lot

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M Asim Nehal 28 June 2016

Excellent poem, the surroundings and the atmosphere is beautifully created for this poem.....Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you sir. Your supportive comment means a lot to me.

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Nosheen Irfan 28 June 2016

The burning flame of candle and the silence of midnight call forth memories...beautiful. You have created the right atmosphere for a recollection of old days. Very poetic imagery to describe your love for life n nature. The nostalgic mood of the poem is soothing n puts the reader in a meditative mode. Thanku for taking inspiration from my poem n coming up with a better write. I enjoyed reading thoroughly.

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Thanks a lot. I am greatly honored by your comment. Wish you best of luck.

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