Monday, March 30, 2009

A Candle Of Tears Comments

Rating: 3.1

A broken heart speaks love in every piece,

but the pieces of my heart speak about you,
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Jerry King
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Inner Whispers 11 April 2009

poignant writings...need time to read all yours...i will be back...thanks, my pleasure to read from yours...

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Very nice poem-so broken hearted yet very strong.A ten from me.....

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Catrina Heart 30 March 2009

Such a touching piece, poignancy was felt all throughout...great similes and metaphors used, and the soft words used added sadness in your tone....lovely penned....10......Thanks! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 'WELCOME TO THE PH FAMILY'..........keep writing! ! !

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Jerry King

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