A Candle In Wind Comments

Hope and light is interconnected and poem also.

As long as there is LIGHT. there is hope. Light is hope.

A poem with perfect rhyming....10+++

nice kranthi the tongue literraly runs with the rhyme and poem superb write cheers

Always hope of tomorrow

nice rhymes good flow of the tongue

the wind and rain is here today, but tommorrow will bring a brighter day. a good write a ten

'Wind left me to stray With a empty tray But light said ay Don’t ever get dismay Life is not just today' This is an inspirational write friend... but for the moment i d like to live the day.. sometimes thinking too much doesn't gona help either! ! ! ! this is a beautiful write friend 10++

'Wind left me to stray With a empty tray But light said ay Don’t ever get dismay Life is not just today' Marvelous and melodious poem.

nice flow and beautiful rhyms............

nice rhymes...very poetic

what a rhyming! from where did you get all these y's? lovely write............

vow! really inspiring. rhyming too. voted10 surya

Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! You're the best rhymer ever! I can't imagine making a poem like this! It's one of a kind and it's really cute!

..........AY rhymes, well structured. A Candle In The Wind like the song says...fine poetic piece...10+++