Monday, October 1, 2007

A Candle For Us Comments

Rating: 2.0

tonight
I write
by candlelight
I watch the flame quiver helplessly
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Jade Leven
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Anoop Gururaj 10 January 2008

we sleep in the same city every night but somehow you seem so far from me Under tthe same moon we lay asleep yet it feels worlds apart i like the poem but i think it wuld be much better if u edit it i jus gavae u an example above but thats wat poetry is about u express ur feelings and then once u have everything out u edit it... but still well written...

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