we sleep in the same city every night
but somehow you seem so far from me
Under tthe same moon we lay asleep
yet it feels worlds apart
i like the poem but i think it wuld be much better if u edit it i jus gavae u an example above but thats wat poetry is about u express ur feelings and then once u have everything out u edit it...
but still well written...
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we sleep in the same city every night but somehow you seem so far from me Under tthe same moon we lay asleep yet it feels worlds apart i like the poem but i think it wuld be much better if u edit it i jus gavae u an example above but thats wat poetry is about u express ur feelings and then once u have everything out u edit it... but still well written...