Wednesday, December 30, 2015

A Candle Burns Comments

Rating: 4.8

A candle burns and melts away
its stately form transforming
but to a fleeting memory
of warmth and welcome glowing
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Liilia Talts Morrison
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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka 30 December 2015

Sounds like a New Year poem. I like the title A candle burns and the beginning line is catchy.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 30 December 2015

Beautiful poetry, a metaphor on life and death, absolutely astounding. Rated 10+

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Joe Davis 30 December 2015

Liilia-I really love this poem! 10 pts.

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