Sunday, February 12, 2012

A Canadian's Poem (1) Comments

Rating: 4.8

and what, after all,
was so wrong
with simple rhyme
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doug bentley
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Harley White 15 April 2021

An awesome poem, both personal and timeless...

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Prabir Gayen 12 December 2018

Beautiful line with thought provoking phrases...a painting of master's hands..

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Melvina Germain 24 October 2015

I think we ought to drive in the tell it like it is lane, laying out the good, the bad and the ugly for all to see. Fantastic poem.....

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Ken E Hall 28 July 2014

Original look at poetry penned very interesting to read would make the Canadian snow melt... do but lift up unheard voices well done Doug I hear you...regards

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Captain Cur 07 May 2013

We write for ourselves and as such we write for humanity.

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Valsa George 01 April 2013

As poets, I think iIt is our self undertaken task' 'to delight and entertain the mind! Stirring up currents of insights, that grow into waves, dipping diamond tipped pens in pools of time! Beautiful expressions and a beautiful poem! Thanks for your encouraging comment on my poem- Evening Breeze!

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Richmond, British Columbia, Canada
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