and what, after all,
was so wrong
with simple rhyme
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Beautiful line with thought provoking phrases...a painting of master's hands..
I think we ought to drive in the tell it like it is lane, laying out the good, the bad and the ugly for all to see. Fantastic poem.....
Original look at poetry penned very interesting to read would make the Canadian snow melt... do but lift up unheard voices well done Doug I hear you...regards
As poets, I think iIt is our self undertaken task' 'to delight and entertain the mind! Stirring up currents of insights, that grow into waves, dipping diamond tipped pens in pools of time! Beautiful expressions and a beautiful poem! Thanks for your encouraging comment on my poem- Evening Breeze!
An awesome poem, both personal and timeless...