A Camel's Monologue Comments

The load of desires and passions...existing as the water we 'drag' does, so often, cause us to plod through life. This verse is one of your finest, Yoonoos.

Your soulfully good and pierce me with your verse.

Of dream and reality! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Of the vast desert of eternity........fantastic write. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.

Excellent imagery. Well done

It is a beautiful poem on life having touching expression and nice collocation. It is a great metaphor too.

A great metaphor so nicely penned.

Wish I had the endurance of a camel. Great imagery. Thank you.

No words to describe the besuty of this poetry.....

very poignant write here and true picture of a camel

The hard toil of life emerges here.

When one looses the desire, then finds true happiness and contentment with the life one has.

The waterlogged lifeload of desire Across traceless tracks Of the vast desert of infinity.//// What a truthful meaning! ! ! ! ! !

No doubt it is a great poem with many qualities.It creates a metaphor regarding inner link between human and camel......

10. 'A camel has 2 humps because a life is a struggle'. (a child 's joke)

Part of human reality.....every round & corner of life's journey will hurt, please & remind us about what is facts what is truth. Camel... human.. keep the same sense of life. Excellent.

Beautiful poem. I wish camels could speak.

life is epic in desert of existence

i thought i was gonna laugh but it seems that it gave more than what i suspected it to be.nice write................

You really have the gift. A.Y.