A Calm River Flow Comments

You can hear from distance very gently...I grew up by the lake and that line evokes great memories...That's the beauty of poetry, that everyone might find different ideas from just one piece. Thanks for sharing.

Men may come and men may go.. but i go on forever.. remember these lines? make this poem more philosophical. there is much to reflect on the flow of the river and flow of human life and society.. thank u for sharing.

Let the river continue to flow calmly. I like this. Thanks.

Rivers continue to create fever She has been dreaded with fear........rivers are feared most....10

Rivers are calm when flow quietly You can hear from distance very gently It touches the bank and flows silently... it is to to watch such scene....10

Rivers are calm when flow quietly You can hear from distance very gently.. i like the river water...10

I like this poem. It's nice to read with flow, and the rythme are not bad. will check out ur other poems too.

Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 38: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 23922601 - A calm river flow Member: Greenwolfe 1962 Comment: There is some wisdom and some nice lines in this piece but it is much too long. It needs to be cut down a bit and the author needs to focus on some aspect of the river. This will force the writer to focus on the precise specific point he wants to make about the river. If he does this, the problems this poem carries with it will disappear. - Greenwolfe 1962 • Re: Meeting of Two Souls by indiscretionate on July 15th,2010,8: 18 am I am a single man who has never married...some aren't as good looking as others i guess. Anyway I appreciate the sanctity of marriage and remember back when people seemed to celebrate anniversaries of 50 years and more, while these days the divorce rate nears record proportion. I wish the best for all who take the plunge, meanwhile I am happy as I am... Indi indiscretionate Posts: 152 Joined: July 5th,2010,7: 49 pm

There is some wisdom and some nice lines in this piece but it is much too long. It needs to be cut down a bit and the author needs to focus on some aspect of the river. This will force the writer to focus on the precise specific point he wants to make about the river. If he does this, the problems this poem carries with it will disappear. ---- Greenwolfe 1962