Saturday, October 17, 2009

A Call Of Duty Comments

Rating: 5.0

A call from a man dying
duty awaits,
his death is sure to follow.
Call of duty awaits
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luke stanley owen
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Carol Gall 17 October 2009

this is very good 10

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Tai Chi Italy 17 October 2009

A heart wrenching piece of poetry here luke, it gives a just sense of pointlessness to the violence of warring. Well done, and keep writing them, you express how you feel and it is clear you feel strongly about this horrible topic of war. Have a lovely weekend and have lots of fun with your friends. Smiling at you

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