Tuesday, January 5, 2010

A Calendar Comments

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Winter:
Inside the embers glow in the grate
While the garden quietly suffocates in snow.
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John Thorkild Ellison
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Adeline Foster 20 June 2010

This is exquisite; what a wonderful picture you paint of the turning year. Invite you to read my ‘Home Is’. Adeline

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Sally Plumb Plumb 12 March 2010

Loved this view of the seasons. Try 'Underfoot' when you've a spare minute, Regards.

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Raynette Eitel 19 January 2010

I like the way you have set this up, John...and I see that your calendar year in England is a bit different from the USA. We talk more about the colors of autumn...but I love the last line of Autumn. Good work.

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Marieta Maglas 09 January 2010

wonderful metaphor The snow forgets what the birds remember wonderful descriptive poem about seasons 10/10

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Fred Babbin 05 January 2010

Your imagery is quite catching (I cn't think of a better word)

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