A Cage! Comments

It is a beautiful poem on life and pain having stunning expression and nice collocation. Enjoyed reading it. I like the most line is... We cannot swim against tides, but can go on with the flow! Thank u dear madam for posting such a gem.

Beautifully written poem..Geetha ji.....Life is well explained in this. Thanks for sharing.

Well done geetha. And it is so very true. Great observation about life!

Nic poem....10 Smile is for deception too In relation When you want to cheat dear ones And still claim the near ones

Toooooooooo good mam. Feeling same...FELT IT MAM...BEAUTIFUL. KEEP WRITING MAM. Your an inspiration for women like me. Thanks for sharing.

We are helpless creature living in a society of customs, traditions and taboos. All this have made this world a cage. We can move in it but can't fly away. We have to live in this cage and we have to die in this cage. Freedom from this cage is death only death. What happens after death? No eye witness.

Our Beloved ones have died but we are also moving with the world! This is the fact of life, which no one can change. Life is only one! We have to accept everything as it is! We cannot swim against tides, but can go on with the flow! A great truth. generally a poet never thinks before what to write. but after writing it looks glittering. A great write.

What ever may be cage represents captivity and it is pitiable. The poem is very nice to read and meanings vary with so much imaginations.

reality and imagination intermingled.....good poem

Very inspiring with wisdom of life.......with beautiful words it rhymes............Geetha.............well composed

A reality check, life is what you make it...yes that cage is there...only sometimes someone else has the key...thought provoking poem indeed.great, regards

Human life is like that only - full of stumbling blocks and chains Even if you like to come out of it - you'll be dragged and pulled in....... very right Geetha

Its so dark, I cannot see myself. As such also you will not be able to see yourself without mirror. I guess your poem will work without that line also If I remain IN this cage for long, Even if I die IN this cage also, Somewhere your poem takes a detour from the cage to some other place altogether which you try to tag it at end.... Not sure if you want that break... Liked the poem though

If every one realises this truth of life, he can be in peace and bliss. A good write. Man is born free but ever in chains!

a good write inside a cage enjoyed

hey Geetha, i must say that your every poem has a very deep and a beautiful meaning.and thank you so much for commenting my poems.good write, keep writing more.god bless you...

we can not swim against tide, right one. I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote.