Sunday, March 3, 2013

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I've reached beyond those limits that bound
And searched around ‘til I finally found
The Pinnacle of Reality
Is in my utter mortality
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Udiah (witness to Yah)
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Lilac Time 27 March 2014

I like this very much...short but so much meaning

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Amitava Sur 20 March 2014

Such a truth is said with such a lucidity. and that is nothing but our inevitable mortality..... very nice

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Marvin Brato 21 October 2013

Indeed, we are bound to be mortal being!

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R.j. Wynn 30 April 2013

The grounds will have their grip on us.

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David Wood 02 April 2013

It shows we are all mortals waiting for deaths sting

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Babatunde Aremu 15 March 2013

What a fantastic poem. The finality of all is mortality. This is really philosophical. Thanks for sharing. Kindly read my poems and comment

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