Monday, April 7, 2014

A Butterfly's Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lying low, as you crawl on the ground
In fruitless attempt to escape all strife.
You pray you won’t be found
In the search for your meaning in life.
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Whitney Davis
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Kim Barney 07 November 2016

I really like this, although I didn't see anything about the butterfly's death in the poem (Did I miss something?) . Maybe it should be called 'Birth of a Butterfly' or something. No matter. It's a great poem anyway. I was drawn to it because I have a poem with a similar title. It's called 'Butterfly of Death' and I invite you to read it. Thanks.

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