Friday, May 7, 2010

A Butterfly Finds Its Way Back Comments

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A butterfly finds its way back

It was a drift from the path
It took place sometime back
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Bashyam Narayanan
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Vaughn Bekker 21 May 2010

what a sweet little poem, i liked it, i too had to read it twice, but enjoyed it none the less, well done

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Brandon Owens 07 May 2010

A very intriguing poem. The rhyme is good, but rhythm breaks to make the rhyme threw me off a bit. I might have to go back and read it again, even though I read it twice through. I really enjoyed the message. Thank you.

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