Monday, November 1, 2010

A Busy Street Comments

Rating: 4.0

Shameless, nude always invites
To outrage her modesty,
Smooth and grey
who would not be
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
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Dr Pintu Mahakul 03 November 2014

Welcomes each old and new visitors, very beautiful observation about busy street. Excellent work.

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Len Webster 11 August 2014

An interesting poem making good use of language. (Unsure about the droning, computerised reading that's on offer, though! It's not the fault of the writer, of course, but it certainly doesn't do his work justice..

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Dickens Joseph Sawo 08 January 2012

i love the imagery and simile in the poem, it is a very inspirational poem when it comes to richness of symbolism.great poem

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Tommy Laster 15 August 2011

It Could Be That Of, I Mean It has A Nice Story Behind It, People Can Take The Coldness emotion's of any woman & Blame Guilty On Her So She Feels Guilty, But In My Eyes It Is Wrong To Blame Everything On A Woman As It Is A Woman Blameing Everything On A Man, I Truly Like The Story & Message Behind It, U Are A Top A Writer(Nice Work Mohammad Akmal Nazir)

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Hilton Ball 22 July 2011

nicely done good source of imagery and emotion used i like it

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Kamini Arichandran 17 July 2011

'Yet always ready for retribution, Like a great saint who never minds to take The burden of their sin'...Very Profound! 10+++

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Anthony Joseph Erangey 15 July 2011

This poem displays a very keen observant mind. It displays a compassionate understanding that can only come from respect. I applaud this work.10

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Anthony Joseph Erangey 15 July 2011

I feel the compassion oozing out of these lines. Loved it. A lesson in observation. Beautiful.

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C. Edgar Nolan 15 July 2011

Nicely done, a bit erratic - intentionally so I imagine. Good job.

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Stefanie Fontker 15 July 2011

Great poem, beautiful words. I like how abstract it is.

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Ron Pate 14 July 2011

Beautifull done, it's a living piece of art..

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Amanda Purificato 08 July 2011

I loved the meaning of this poem. It was nicely put great job (: &thanks for rateing my poem

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 July 2011

this is wonderful ink.the meaning is crystal clear.liked it.

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Miki22 Smith 07 July 2011

I can't really comprehend what the plot of this poem, but it was ok, I guess.

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Prarthana Ranjit 06 July 2011

it's very strong and expressive. thanks for sharing! & thanks for reading 'the late night love city' :)

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Mohammed Albalushi 03 July 2011

very expressive, describe the situation in all bases, well done and thanks 4 sharing

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Robert Melliard 03 July 2011

This is a powerful poem, though perhaps a little too abstract for me at some points. I like the comparison to a harlot.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 July 2011

 From: Isaac Ziv (United States ;)  To: Mohd. Akmal Nazir  Date Time: 7/2/2011 12: 42: 00 AM (GMT-6: 00)  Subject: A busy street hi, Thank you for your encouraging words... 'A busy street' is it written on a real character? ? ? The writing is nice and veryexpressive....just my concern is that women may not like it.

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Kelly Rivas-chacon 28 June 2011

This is a good poem Keep the good work

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Anuja Krishnan 28 June 2011

Good word indeed..keep going!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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