A Busy Street Comments

Welcomes each old and new visitors, very beautiful observation about busy street. Excellent work.

An interesting poem making good use of language. (Unsure about the droning, computerised reading that's on offer, though! It's not the fault of the writer, of course, but it certainly doesn't do his work justice..

i love the imagery and simile in the poem, it is a very inspirational poem when it comes to richness of symbolism.great poem

It Could Be That Of, I Mean It has A Nice Story Behind It, People Can Take The Coldness emotion's of any woman & Blame Guilty On Her So She Feels Guilty, But In My Eyes It Is Wrong To Blame Everything On A Woman As It Is A Woman Blameing Everything On A Man, I Truly Like The Story & Message Behind It, U Are A Top A Writer(Nice Work Mohammad Akmal Nazir)

nicely done good source of imagery and emotion used i like it

'Yet always ready for retribution, Like a great saint who never minds to take The burden of their sin'...Very Profound! 10+++

This poem displays a very keen observant mind. It displays a compassionate understanding that can only come from respect. I applaud this work.10

I feel the compassion oozing out of these lines. Loved it. A lesson in observation. Beautiful.

Nicely done, a bit erratic - intentionally so I imagine. Good job.

Great poem, beautiful words. I like how abstract it is.

Beautifull done, it's a living piece of art..

I loved the meaning of this poem. It was nicely put great job (: &thanks for rateing my poem

this is wonderful ink.the meaning is crystal clear.liked it.

I can't really comprehend what the plot of this poem, but it was ok, I guess.

it's very strong and expressive. thanks for sharing! & thanks for reading 'the late night love city' :)

very expressive, describe the situation in all bases, well done and thanks 4 sharing

This is a powerful poem, though perhaps a little too abstract for me at some points. I like the comparison to a harlot.

 From: Isaac Ziv (United States ;)  To: Mohd. Akmal Nazir  Date Time: 7/2/2011 12: 42: 00 AM (GMT-6: 00)  Subject: A busy street hi, Thank you for your encouraging words... 'A busy street' is it written on a real character? ? ? The writing is nice and veryexpressive....just my concern is that women may not like it.

This is a good poem Keep the good work

Good word indeed..keep going!