Monday, December 5, 2005

A Busy Mind Comments

Rating: 3.5

Sitting here with all types of thoughts going through my mind,
searching for love that I can not find.

Wanting you more than I think you want me,
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Judy Hill
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 16 December 2005

Hey! Igot this. A busy mind WAS not settled until the right one came along! Good poem. Congratulations. LSP

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Joseph Daly 08 December 2005

I go along with Peter on this. This is a well structured piece and I particularly am impressed that you gave it this title as it seems to suggest how we can engage ourselves profoundly with one issue.

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Peter Lebuhn 08 December 2005

Judy, Excellent work I liked how you started each line Sitting Wanting Fascinated and so forth you were telling where your mind was going to. Very organized Awesome stuff, Peter

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