Tuesday, July 17, 2012

A Busted Myth Comments

Rating: 4.5

Baby, hold me tight and-
away from the grips of sheer insanity,
I don't do love at first sight,
Something I consider a myth,
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Robin Bennett
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Captain Cur 28 July 2012

Hot and buzzy. Licking myths like Honey.

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James Harding 22 July 2012

drinking taking valiums and opiates... he took advantage of you while you was drunk you didn't have a chance to escape the love lol good write 10/10

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Ronn Michael Salinas 22 July 2012

There are unnecessary punctuations, it seems. The drug references are worrisome lol to be honest

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Connor Whyte 20 July 2012

Fascinating this really spoke to me I don't believe in love at first sight but when you feel it you don't want to believe it. This is a beauty.

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Black On Black Arts 19 July 2012

Robin you are indeed a great writer light years ahead of anything i have written or read i only wish i could draw such a vivid picture in my work as you did u made me a believer thats no myth B.O.B.A

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