A Burst Of Color Comments

Excellence and beauty woven in anice poetical tapestry - a masterpiece.

everything in here is beautiful, Ben..pinkish blue, ambrosial blue...i love that color.. But then i love the whole piece.Thank you for this wonderful burst of color.. take care and God bless you.. Hugs, Meggie

Beautiful poem with nice imagery,10++

Another very strong poem. Ben, you really have a way with words. The imagery so visual, the colors so tangible, I see the day opening like a flower. brilliant!

that was rich and colorful with a beautiful imagery... : D

the grand masters have nothing on mother nature

The colors got my attention first....then my eyes....then my ears....and then my mind...and then the whole of me.....thanks

Ben, (submitting this again) 'Poetry is the record of the best and happiest mements of the happiest and best minds.'--Shelley I agree' This quote speaks well of you! Dorothy

Ben, 'Poetry is the record of the best and happiest moments of the happpiest and best minds.'---Shelley I agree! That quote fits you perfectly... Dorothy

Just discovered you; what pleasure!

Its a sweet piece.Excellant painting by words.

imagination colourful...a poetic painting...congrats, ben

into the river of passion.......... very nicely composed and good choice of words i must say.

I was completely blown away by the beauty in this poem.

Rich and sensual like a fine Japanese water color.