Wednesday, July 16, 2008

A Burning Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting in a serene silence
having left chaos behind
away from the world
and its daily grind.
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David Harris
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 July 2008

Your topic today is learning my friend, well every day you learn some thing new... Andy 10

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Vincent James Turner 16 July 2008

nice poem David although the rhymes come accross as a little forced, however there is a strong messsage in this poem, and you manage to avoid coming over all preachy. nice work Regardo Vincent

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