Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, June 19, 2010

A Burning Desire Comments

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It is burning desire from heart of a lover
He can’t hide it from anybody under some cover
It may come to be known to every one
It may move on smoothly if objected by none
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Maulin Shah 06 August 2010

It is burning desire from heart of a lover He can’t hide it from anybody under some cover.. it is natural always....10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 August 2010

‘He may consider her as things of merchandise’ Wahoooo…slap on male dominated society…of course changes are coming…Uncle very wisely you’ve caught the oscillations of women…only trust/respect [mutual] all needed…to make a smooth journey in marital life….friend life…’liv. together life’…&c…. thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Women are not like Hire and Fire lol n

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Marieta Maglas 22 June 2010

Vividly written and interesting to read. Excellent poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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