Friday, May 15, 2009

A Burden Shared Comments

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Bent oaks absorb the incessant drizzle
On dark thick shoulders,
Dripping excess on the ground below.
Shading deeper with wetness,
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Ron Flowers 25 May 2009

Another vivid picture, Susan. Ron

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 16 May 2009

A beautiful wavering image, very well described. Regards Naseer

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Keith Parsons 15 May 2009

I can picture the trees swaying quite vividly...nice description.

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