A Burden On Individual Comments
It is great burden on individual if he tries to conceal
His conscience may bite till he doesn’t reveal
It is like mustering medicine on wounds to heal
He may have peace of mind and fee it in real
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Good diction…educative…wise… ‘…One must remain particular about doing small things…’ Yeah doing small things is dip-stick-test’ for a doer…e.g. one may spend million INR in weeding of daughter…but when giving a few bucks to a beggar his face flutter …I’ve watched it …and you’ve caught it… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
Your ideas are profound and your poem well-crafted. I know I'll learn a lot from you. Thanks for sharing.
Lengthy poem but well written I enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me
the last line is convincing..i like it...nicely done. lengthy but nice...
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7/25/2025 8:36:31 PM # 1.0.0
Everything will be fine with the advent of self confidence Your heart may not skip with any of the bad incidence It may prove to be a great asset on your part It will good beginning with happy start Nice reading it thank for sharing it :)