Monday, July 17, 2023

A Bunch Of Balloons Comments

Rating: ★5.0

My joys are a bunch of balloons going high
Taking its flight to the cloudy sky
Didak da Didak da my son sings
Stares at me in smiley lips and big eyes
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Dr Dillip K Swain
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 25 December 2023

Beautiful. Loved it. Top score

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Bri Edwards 25 December 2023

Five *****s for 'Dad'. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 25 December 2023

The balloons are chasing clouds and your son enjoys it? I THINK SO. Your last 2 lines are 'a good father showing through' for sure. Now GET BACK TO work! ! !

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Bri Edwards 25 December 2023

line 4: I would use 'stares at me 'with'...'......, not 'in'.. : )

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 August 2023

This is a wonderful share Dillip TFS Bravo! ! ! !

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