A Bunch Of Balloons Poem by Dr Dillip K Swain

A Bunch Of Balloons

Rating: 5.0

My joys are a bunch of balloons going high
Taking its flight to the cloudy sky
Didak da Didak da my son sings
Stares at me in smiley lips and big eyes

My little son is holding my thigh
Pressing tighter and tighter as the bunch goes up high
As the balloons chase the clouds way
The sailing cloud doubles his joy!

The kid should know I must leave
A lot of work I need to complete
My loaded tasks are left incomplete
Can't spend my time in utter ease

My brief stress mingles with his pleasure
My soul approves it as a treasure!

Copyright @ Dillip K Swain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Beautiful. Loved it. Top score

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Bri Edwards 25 December 2023

Five *****s for 'Dad'. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 25 December 2023

The balloons are chasing clouds and your son enjoys it? I THINK SO. Your last 2 lines are 'a good father showing through' for sure. Now GET BACK TO work! ! !

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Bri Edwards 25 December 2023

line 4: I would use 'stares at me 'with'...'......, not 'in'.. : )

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 August 2023

This is a wonderful share Dillip TFS Bravo! ! ! !

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