Monday, February 12, 2007

A Bumpkin's Chronicle Comments

Rating: 4.1

He likes her burgundy lips
And he begs for a kiss.
The poor chap really misses
And he regrets of the wild goose chase.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Allemagne Roßmann 16 February 2010

The naive Goody-goody who walks from the city end helplessly? ................................funny though it speaks of other serious affairs of life in a poetic way.

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Sandra Fowler 13 February 2007

Another poem written in your own unique style. True poets are always willing to give themselves away in words. Your dedication to Denis Joe is also very touching. Old friends are irreplaceable.Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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gone gone 12 February 2007

Dear Nimal a fine poem about the twists and turns and mysteries of life...told with poignant delicacy..... and your having dedicated it to Denis Joe....he is indeed a fine human being and a wonderful poet........I miss him very much.....and send him love always.....his, as yours, is a loving heart that sees and feels so much.........thankyou Love, D.

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