A Buffet To Remember Comments
It was a buffet to remember
With a lovely Hawaiian theme
Food so fresh and flavorful
It was truly a food critic's dream
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Nicely composed buffet with nice ending. 'It was just like a holiday! ' nice imagery is used, love it. 10++
The last line gives the required punch. I appreciate your simple language. Our poets are yet to know that poetry can also mean such a simple, straight and well framed stanzas.
Sounds like a delightful get together, Marilyn. I enjoyed reading it. have a good day Ron
yeahhhhhhh..........holiday we are.feel like holiday when i read your piece.the attraction is always there marilyn.great job.
nice! I like the words, The perfect way to celebrate. keep writing! could you read my poems too? thank you.
Ahh, going Hawaiian wow! Bet Harold loved it! Hope you didn't make him carry (his own plate) Marilyn, Kidding! *10*! Best wishes, Friend Thad
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7/18/2025 5:23:12 PM # 1.0.0
Such a lovely simple write Marilyn...Harold's 100th Birthday merited such a super celebratory buffet...