Wednesday, February 19, 2014

A Bubble Bath Comments

Rating: 5.0

I shed my appearance of the present time,
To return to man's immortal state sublime,
And be pure of nature and form,
Descending into waters clear and warm,
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Alexander Thomas
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Bri Edwards 28 February 2022

'And accept life's futility, Bowing to it with humility, '. Well, sir, the 'futility' part rings a bell, but not the 'humility' part! ! ! For me I mean. ;) bri

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Practicing Poetess 04 August 2017

Another winner. So vividly written, I nearly could feel myself swimming! This one gets a 10 from me!

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