Tuesday, July 29, 2008

A Bubble Bath Story*#* Comments

Rating: 5.0

She returns from her long day
The dim lights in the hall leads
The way to the master bath
Her foot steps echo far to near
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Pirate Love Magic Man
COMMENTS

Oh! how very romantical! ... lol... but truly, this poem reflects a sense of romanticism and delivers the sense of love and want. The imagery is done wonderfully, it is as if i was there, watching her skin glow with the candlelight. The bath seems very playful, yet still hints that undertone of sensuality. The end is nicely done, hinting to the 'rest of the night' which i am sure was great.

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jennifer hall 09 December 2008

very sweet..nice poem

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**paris* forever forgotten** 09 December 2008

oooh, i like. very sensual and sexy. keep it up!

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pied piper 11 September 2008

You are so romantic. Any woman would so love this treatment.

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Pied Piper Berry 05 September 2008

Well penned.... I enjoyed this.

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Stacey Watts 05 September 2008

Very romantic. You are very talented this story is beautiful

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Wow this is really good! Its very nicely romantic! Love it! ~Sunshine :)

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(: God's Wild Child :) 03 August 2008

Aww, i love it, very romantic. good job. keep it up.

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DELETED NOW 01 August 2008

ok this is more real romance not played out romance and it does not sound like stupid romeo it sounds like ...............maybe*thinking* oh well it was relaxing like I thought it would be. I liked it.

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Oh dear.... Oh maw goodness.... Its wonderful Kat

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Sounds Lovely! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! <3Payyton

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Serenity Prayer 29 July 2008

wow......deep....great job. i love it. very romantic.

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