She returns from her long day
The dim lights in the hall leads
The way to the master bath
Her foot steps echo far to near
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oooh, i like. very sensual and sexy. keep it up!
Very romantic. You are very talented this story is beautiful
Wow this is really good! Its very nicely romantic! Love it! ~Sunshine :)
Aww, i love it, very romantic. good job. keep it up.
ok this is more real romance not played out romance and it does not sound like stupid romeo it sounds like ...............maybe*thinking* oh well it was relaxing like I thought it would be. I liked it.
Oh dear.... Oh maw goodness.... Its wonderful Kat
Sounds Lovely! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! <3Payyton
Oh! how very romantical! ... lol... but truly, this poem reflects a sense of romanticism and delivers the sense of love and want. The imagery is done wonderfully, it is as if i was there, watching her skin glow with the candlelight. The bath seems very playful, yet still hints that undertone of sensuality. The end is nicely done, hinting to the 'rest of the night' which i am sure was great.