A Bubble Comments

Gorgeous! Kids would love this too!

Your poems are very appealing and you do a nice job of building simple visuals into large themes. Your rhyme scheme and meter make me envision and beautiful children's book about bubbles that the parents can also enjoy. Nice writing style. Great writing and fun reading. Thanks.

Bringing a bubble to life, if short in length! Wonderfully done!

A very lyrical bubble. And now I'm soaring.

love it.. it puts a smile on my face..very nice done...

Autobiography of a bubble. What a joy!

Oh the exhiliration of being a bubble all colourful and airy, floating through the sky..... bye bye world as it dies.....ahhh poor bubble... Ruthie: o)

INTERESTING THE STORY OF THIS BUBBLE..LOVELY TO READ

A nice bubble with a little bit of air about himself. Great job of giving him some personality. Love the whimsical attitude you have

thanks for the poem comment, i like your stly- they're funny and appeal to everyone- nice one

Awesome... I give it a 10...

Oh how sweet and precious is this? ? You captured my mind driftiing with the bubble so cleverly and gentley touched my heart as I could feel the drifting with such color and anticiapation of wonder..... Excellent Bonnie Collins

You write some pretty good poems and this is one of them. Have you ever seen a bird peck a bubble or was that just poetic license?

Hey, Joe - I like your style! Light and carefree, with an easy flow and nice rhyme. My kind of poetry. Love the perspective of the bubble as though it were a live entity. Nice work! Linda

Haahah, very cool and fun write! Great pick-me-up after a trying day, thank you! Lee