Friday, April 9, 2010

A Brutal Beginning Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know
There’s something
In this weight in my chest
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Raymond J Wright
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Adalie Hettie 17 April 2010

Mr. Wright, Nothing simple about brutal beginnings/endings. I think any poem that can force an emotion in a total stranger must be pretty good right? I vote 10. Thanks for sharing! Adalie Hettie

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Roy Lee 14 April 2010

A simple structure that reads well with a powerful meaning, Thanks.

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