Wednesday, May 23, 2012

A Brown Brooding Dove Comments

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A brown brooding dove
Sat on a perch
With slender delicate beak
And flawless curve of the face
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azmat naushad asif
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Wahab Abdul 25 May 2012

a good one nothing wrong with this poem......just concentrate on the flow.....now a days only important thing in poetry.......rewrite the poem with more time you will see a havoc change on your own work.....this is the trick of the trade.

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