a good one nothing wrong with this poem......just concentrate on the flow.....now a days only important thing in poetry.......rewrite the poem with more time you will see a havoc change on your own work.....this is the trick of the trade.
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a good one nothing wrong with this poem......just concentrate on the flow.....now a days only important thing in poetry.......rewrite the poem with more time you will see a havoc change on your own work.....this is the trick of the trade.