Thursday, January 19, 2012

A Brother's Touch Comments

Rating: 5.0

When we were kids and sent to bed
When dusk had barely passed,
My brother Tom and I would play
A game, "I Touched You Last."
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Robert Winthrop
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 29 March 2012

What a loving tribute to a dear brother. I like the way you expressed your life with him from childhood through adulthood and the final goodbye touch. Excellent poem!

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Victoria Gauci 21 January 2012

Dear Robert, I have enjoyed this so much. How beautifully you have captured your brother and your memories with him. Thank you so much for putting it to paper and sharing it. I feel the same rythmn to your poetry as I feel I have in mine. I would like you to read my poem Missing M and if you do, please let me know what you think. I am going to put you in my Favorite Poet list. I look forward to reading all of your work. You are very talented. Smiles, Victoria

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Johnny Big Balls 19 January 2012

Touching and personal. ten out of ten

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