Thursday, November 16, 2017

A Broom Song Comments

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I sweep this way, I sweep that way
To gather the clutter right way
I sweep this way, I sweep that way
If only I'm held the right way
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Indira Renganathan
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Seema Chowdhury 20 November 2017

A fun write. A nice composition.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 November 2017

When man starts thinking, in fact he starts sweeping his heart and brain. When he finishes sweeping he gets a heyday and finds a shining metaled highway for his soul heading to the eternal soul of love, peace, tolerance, coexistence and human brotherhood. Apparently a funny poem but it has serious meanings as well.

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Indira Renganathan 18 November 2017

Thank you Akhtar...you have commented the way I expected...very happy

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2017

Fantastic expression. Amusing one. Full of fun. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Indira Renganathan 18 November 2017

Thank you Kumar...very encouraging to have your comment on every poem of mine

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 November 2017

Brroom Broom song comes from a poetic soul Wonderful expression 10

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Indira Renganathan 18 November 2017

I admire your comments as much as I like your poems....thank you Dillip

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