A Brook In The City Comments
in my heart
a river runs
alluvial, fishes,
leaves, flowers and all
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John, I really love this! I can see the brook...and the fish and I think boy it would be nice to be there right now! Great job, wonderful title and just a well written piece of poetry! Keep sharing from your heart and congratulations on being #2 in the popular IP votes! I can see why you are there. =Shelley=
John...... I love this poem! Beautiful expression of memory and spirit. i could still collect that childhood heart that had gone afflutter the river that has changed course to run through my heart
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7/26/2025 12:34:51 AM # 1.0.0
a catfish winds its way up to the surface shows its pinkish whiskers and round mouth and down in a fleet second EXCELLENT imagery right there...the descriptions in this one jump off the page almost as one of the 'fish' you describe might...beautiful