Hear water breaking in a brook
Over rocks that are timeless with age -
A sound near as old as the earth itself
With a meaning beyond any sage.
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Hi Kanav, thanks for your kind words - much appreciated. As a kid growing up in New Brunswick, we had a country place where a nearby brook flowed into the Hammond river. It was a very picturesque setting with falls, rapids, crystalline water - a great spot of natural beauty - hence this poem. Cheers!
When you were in 10 th grade, you wrote a poem on a brook. After many many years, at the age of 57, I wrote a poem on a brook. Both are similar in many ways! I invite you to read my poem By the Side of a Brook! Watching clear running waters and listening to the sound of a brook is a joy! Enjoyed your beautiful write! !
And I wrote my By A Brook at 67! Can you believe that? I think the three of us should get together one day and have tea by a brook.
Lucid presentation......................beautifully worded, Sir! ............loved it
Really nice! ! ! Simple language creat an imaginary world.
I was led to this lovely poem by your comments on Valsa's By the side of a brook I am well rewarded, Thank you
Hi Loke, it put a smile in my heart that you appreciated this poem....every time I read it, I find myself right in the very place which gave me the inspiration to write it. I took a few minutes yesterday to look at your poepoem.....great imagery! Cheers!